2nd update for today. If you're a bit lost, go back a page.

Cloud is starting to be better drawn. It usually takes me a while to get used to drawing a character and making them look consistant.Same for May. I keep changing switching the white and orange of her dress around.

The next few pages will focus more on Rhea and her past but Mouse and the others will be back soon.

I thought Rhea had purple eyes? oO;



Great art! <33 it!

Oh, she does. Just after all the highlighting they came out kinda blue.

this is coming out very interesting ~<3 poor fishy </3 ;__; i really like how Rhea's hair looks in the last panel for some reason

Cool!
This is getting really good! ^^
Maybe after afew pages, Cloud and May can get some alone time! *crys alittle* I can imagine May blushing and falling for Cloud! LOL XD

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Mouse is such a jerk...
Poor little fishy...
Great page tho! I loves it! :3